Friday 30 November 2012
Blog post #7
In my book the protagonist Charlie has two ordinary worlds one where she is at the academy competing and another when she is at home hanging out with the love of her life. I think she likes sitting at home with the love of her life more than she likes going to the academy, of course it is her dream come true but her relationship with Darwin is stronger.
At the academy she is starting to let her feelings for Darwin affect her. She daydreams about her and Darwin together all the time. She has to pay more attention otherwise she will be kicked out. (Lisi Harrison)
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You have a start here and are keeping up, but you need to go back and check for the following:
ReplyDelete- Italicize your book titles.
- Check the class blog to verify that you have fulfilled the requirements. You are missing elements (audio/visual, response to prompts etc)
- YOu need to give details Natalie and develop your posts.
- Please label your posts with both a number and a title.
- Edit for language use!
I see that you have not heeded my advice!
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